Okay, after two days I realized I can't resist this meme:
Look at my user icons, choose one and write me a drabble about it! Post it in comments or link to it in comments so I can squee over it and love you forever.
Wow. this is... I can't really put into words how grateful I am for this. I love so many little pieces of it, I can't count them all.
I loved the last sentence of the first paragraph: Jake has already fallen for Heath, he's just not sure how deep. God, what a way to start a story. It wraps up the first paragraph perfectly, and gives room for so much more...
"You're so easy!" Heath rolls his eyes and grins at Jake. "You begged." And if this were a competition, Heath would have won. God, I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE, baby! Because I can see it, and I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon. <3 How much do I love you? A whole lot. :D
I love nervous!Jake worrying that Heath might figure it out.
And I love that Heath eventually does, in the next paragraph: Every time Heath thinks about how Jake ends up in the movie, it sorta breaks his heart. How it'd break Ennis's heart. followed by the revelation. Oh, boy.
I love the ending.
I love you. This was perfect. It's so sweet and warm and I want to read it over and over again. <3 <3 <3
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Date: 2004-07-26 10:48 am (UTC)Oh.
Honey, you said you'd write me a drabble.
Wow. this is... I can't really put into words how grateful I am for this. I love so many little pieces of it, I can't count them all.
I loved the last sentence of the first paragraph: Jake has already fallen for Heath, he's just not sure how deep. God, what a way to start a story. It wraps up the first paragraph perfectly, and gives room for so much more...
"You're so easy!" Heath rolls his eyes and grins at Jake. "You begged." And if this were a competition, Heath would have won. God, I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE, baby! Because I can see it, and I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon. <3 How much do I love you? A whole lot. :D
I love nervous!Jake worrying that Heath might figure it out.
And I love that Heath eventually does, in the next paragraph: Every time Heath thinks about how Jake ends up in the movie, it sorta breaks his heart. How it'd break Ennis's heart. followed by the revelation. Oh, boy.
I love the ending.
I love you. This was perfect. It's so sweet and warm and I want to read it over and over again. <3 <3 <3
Cowboys, baby. Cowboys!
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Date: 2004-07-27 03:17 am (UTC)I'm glad you like it. Hee.
I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon.
I had to. Because these two Icons are related. Yes.
How weird am I?*g*It was a pleasure to write it - though
I think "Cowboys, baby. Cowboys!" would be the slogan of our love if it already weren't theirs. *g*