Poetry!

[kohaku]

Okay, here are some eleveners I have written. I don't really want to post the poems, but since I promised to, I have to. *sighs*
Note to myself: I will never ever promise to write/ post/ paint something. Never ever.

Eleveners have to have a certain form, they consist of eleven words (big surprise here - duh), which have to be arranged in a particular way.

Here they are:
Please post feedback under comments... or send to my inbox. I do accept feedback in form of money, chocolate or diet coke. But nice words will do too ;)

Eleveners, untitled

Scot
drinking beer
laughing with me
at my bubbly jokes
Alan.



Derbyshire
at night
almost entering Nottinghamshire
walking around in circles
Ilkeston.



Temper
too quick
heartbeat too fast
blame my dumb ancestors
Irish.



Jay
playing guitar
jealously I listen
numb fingers dancing meekly
wannabe.

Comments

You've done it !!!

[(Anonymous)]

It's so great you post your poetry! because they are so good :)
but I'm missing one :) you know wich one I mean :)

so now you got only some nice words from me :)
all the other feedback you already got from me :)

and as I promised I will now go to bed thinking of someone special

please post a lot more of your excelent poetry, PLEASE !!!!

your LL