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Feb. 18th, 2003 04:10 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Time has entered a non passing zone. Why is it still 4.10 pm?
And it's so cold! I'm not sure I have ever felt so cold in my whole life. If I didn't know it better, I'd say the heater broke. I want to go home and wrap myself in a blanket. Suddenly I envy everyone who lives in a region with tons and tons of snow. I fancy the idea of getting snowed in. But no, it's crispy clear. Pity.
Before I rant on, I'll go call my hubby. I wonder if he's ok. *brrr*
I'm reading "number 9 dream" right now. Wonderful crafted sentences. I'm in awe when somebody can do this. You want an example? Suuuure! Here you go!
"A galaxy of cream unribbons in my coffee cup, and the background chatter pulls into focus. My first morning in Tokyo, and I am already getting ahead of myself. The Jupiter Cafe sloshes with lunch-hour laughter, Friday plottings, clinkling saucers."
And it goes on like this. Show don't tell. Something I have to practise more.
(Edit) Called my hubby. He still loves me. Whee! (stupid PMS)
And it's so cold! I'm not sure I have ever felt so cold in my whole life. If I didn't know it better, I'd say the heater broke. I want to go home and wrap myself in a blanket. Suddenly I envy everyone who lives in a region with tons and tons of snow. I fancy the idea of getting snowed in. But no, it's crispy clear. Pity.
Before I rant on, I'll go call my hubby. I wonder if he's ok. *brrr*
I'm reading "number 9 dream" right now. Wonderful crafted sentences. I'm in awe when somebody can do this. You want an example? Suuuure! Here you go!
"A galaxy of cream unribbons in my coffee cup, and the background chatter pulls into focus. My first morning in Tokyo, and I am already getting ahead of myself. The Jupiter Cafe sloshes with lunch-hour laughter, Friday plottings, clinkling saucers."
And it goes on like this. Show don't tell. Something I have to practise more.
(Edit) Called my hubby. He still loves me. Whee! (stupid PMS)