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Kohaku ([personal profile] kohaku) wrote2004-07-25 06:46 pm

Writing Meme

Okay, after two days I realized I can't resist this meme:

Look at my user icons, choose one and write me a drabble about it! Post it in comments or link to it in comments so I can squee over it and love you forever.

Icons can be found here.

[identity profile] kohaku1977.livejournal.com 2004-07-26 10:48 am (UTC)(link)
Oh.







Oh.






Honey, you said you'd write me a drabble.






Wow. this is... I can't really put into words how grateful I am for this. I love so many little pieces of it, I can't count them all.

I loved the last sentence of the first paragraph: Jake has already fallen for Heath, he's just not sure how deep. God, what a way to start a story. It wraps up the first paragraph perfectly, and gives room for so much more...

"You're so easy!" Heath rolls his eyes and grins at Jake. "You begged." And if this were a competition, Heath would have won. God, I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE, baby! Because I can see it, and I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon. <3 How much do I love you? A whole lot. :D

I love nervous!Jake worrying that Heath might figure it out.

And I love that Heath eventually does, in the next paragraph: Every time Heath thinks about how Jake ends up in the movie, it sorta breaks his heart. How it'd break Ennis's heart. followed by the revelation. Oh, boy.

I love the ending.

I love you. This was perfect. It's so sweet and warm and I want to read it over and over again. <3 <3 <3

Cowboys, baby. Cowboys!
jb_slasher: enter shikari; common dreads (heath+jake)

[personal profile] jb_slasher 2004-07-27 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Well, it was a drabble. Then it told me it wasn't enough and it wanted sisters and brothers and lovers. So, it suddenly was a fic.

I'm glad you like it. Hee.

I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon.
I had to. Because these two Icons are related. Yes. How weird am I? *g*

It was a pleasure to write it - though [livejournal.com profile] fractal_moonshi's little posting to [livejournal.com profile] wranglers helped me a bit. And of course, your Icon. I love you so much.

I think "Cowboys, baby. Cowboys!" would be the slogan of our love if it already weren't theirs. *g*