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vegetariansushi I'm not sure if you meant something like this, well, I'm pretty sure you didn't but I felt sad and decided that although I wanted it to turn out differently, to play around with it more, it still works. It strikes me as too bitter, but maybe that's just RL seeping in on the edges.
Subtle
a whispered felony
a single word
mumbled, not even spoken clearly
what broke my heart?
not the betrayal you could not hide in your sleep
but the name you let slip off your tongue
so carelessly
that it almost chattered on the floor.
vegetariansushi I'm not sure if you meant something like this, well, I'm pretty sure you didn't but I felt sad and decided that although I wanted it to turn out differently, to play around with it more, it still works. It strikes me as too bitter, but maybe that's just RL seeping in on the edges. Subtle
a whispered felony
a single word
mumbled, not even spoken clearly
what broke my heart?
not the betrayal you could not hide in your sleep
but the name you let slip off your tongue
so carelessly
that it almost chattered on the floor.
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My "normal" voice is... Hm. My normal voice is not the local accent where I'm from. I spent a lot of time in other states when I was small - mostly North Carolina and Massachusettes - so I have a slight accent from there on some words, and then on others I sound less American and more somewhere-else, probably Canadian. It's hard to explain. I'll try and find something that I can read in my normal voice, though, and I'll read the one thing in one of the local acents from here.
*licks*