Wow. this is... I can't really put into words how grateful I am for this. I love so many little pieces of it, I can't count them all.
I loved the last sentence of the first paragraph: Jake has already fallen for Heath, he's just not sure how deep. God, what a way to start a story. It wraps up the first paragraph perfectly, and gives room for so much more...
"You're so easy!" Heath rolls his eyes and grins at Jake. "You begged." And if this were a competition, Heath would have won. God, I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE, baby! Because I can see it, and I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon. <3 How much do I love you? A whole lot. :D
I love nervous!Jake worrying that Heath might figure it out.
And I love that Heath eventually does, in the next paragraph: Every time Heath thinks about how Jake ends up in the movie, it sorta breaks his heart. How it'd break Ennis's heart. followed by the revelation. Oh, boy.
I love the ending.
I love you. This was perfect. It's so sweet and warm and I want to read it over and over again. <3 <3 <3
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Honey, you said you'd write me a drabble.
Wow. this is... I can't really put into words how grateful I am for this. I love so many little pieces of it, I can't count them all.
I loved the last sentence of the first paragraph: Jake has already fallen for Heath, he's just not sure how deep. God, what a way to start a story. It wraps up the first paragraph perfectly, and gives room for so much more...
"You're so easy!" Heath rolls his eyes and grins at Jake. "You begged." And if this were a competition, Heath would have won. God, I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE, baby! Because I can see it, and I love that you managed to squeeze in a reference to your So.Easy. icon. <3 How much do I love you? A whole lot. :D
I love nervous!Jake worrying that Heath might figure it out.
And I love that Heath eventually does, in the next paragraph: Every time Heath thinks about how Jake ends up in the movie, it sorta breaks his heart. How it'd break Ennis's heart. followed by the revelation. Oh, boy.
I love the ending.
I love you. This was perfect. It's so sweet and warm and I want to read it over and over again. <3 <3 <3
Cowboys, baby. Cowboys!