Add everything!

Don't worry about the beta'dness or lack thereof - I've never in my life had a beta for anything. Which I'm sure is detrimental to my writing, but I feel bad asking my friends to read something that they may not like, you know? But the point is that it leaves me with very little room to be critical of other people's work. (Unless they ask for it, obviously.)

I wanna see, though .:)